Drafts so far

Dhis is the magazine products hat I have been creating and this is how they look so far, I still have more changes to make on them to make them up to standard.

Feedback on the double page spread

I had some feedback so that I could start to make some improvements.

I created a red background but people said that it clashed with all of the other things in the screen. they also said that i had not made maximum uise of the space and that the boxes were separted so that the pages had too much white spavce for a teengae magazine.

Changes to double page spread

Draft double page spreads from sarahwalley

Final Contents Page

Changes to the Contents

Draft contents from sarahwalley

Changes I made to the Contents pge.

I wanted the contents page to be different than other magazines. I started putting images onto the contents page, but found halfway through that the contents page looked more like my front cover. I thought about a simple approach to this page so that people can easily find the page that they are looking for.

feedback for the contents page.

I had the contents page reviewed by a few people in the class they said that it was two basic and the webpage looked like I had ran out of ideas. They said that i had the correct amount of informnation but they thought the layout was not used to maximum potential. Also they said that I needed to make thye image bigger and they said that the image used was not as good as some of the others that I had taken.

Contents page

This is the startings of the contents pages that i have started to compile

Front cover Final

This is the front cover of my draft magazine cover for the genre pop for teenagers.

Magazine been reviewed by people

I have had my magazine reviewed by a few people in the class. I have been told that I need to take pictures of people not in uniform, as the uniform will alter the validity and realism of the magazine. I have been told that some of the colours are too bright and you sometimes cannot read the writing. So I will need to add some variety in strengths of colours. I have also been informed that the spelling of some of the words is wrong, this is important to change especially for the teenage audience. I think that the background could be altered to still make the magazine colourful, but still being able to read the writing. I will change the magazine according to the comments that I have received to make it more user friendly