Magazine been reviewed by people

I have had my magazine reviewed by a few people in the class. I have been told that I need to take pictures of people not in uniform, as the uniform will alter the validity and realism of the magazine. I have been told that some of the colours are too bright and you sometimes cannot read the writing. So I will need to add some variety in strengths of colours. I have also been informed that the spelling of some of the words is wrong, this is important to change especially for the teenage audience. I think that the background could be altered to still make the magazine colourful, but still being able to read the writing. I will change the magazine according to the comments that I have received to make it more user friendly